Friday, 28 January 2011

Teen Angels WIP

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mini update...

My day job has been eating up all my time recently so I haven't had much chance to draw.
All I've got to show for the past couple of weeks is this Captain Caveman and the Teen Angels pic, but I can't decide if it's worth finishing or not. Any opinions will be considered!

18 comments:

Tibo3D said...

Hahaha Nice! Want to see it finish!

Smudge said...

I'd love to see it finished as well. May I suggest instead of the sour look he has, perhaps a snarky half smile saying "Don't you wish you were me?". I for one wouldn't be so sad/depressed in that situation.

Ben Newman said...

Tibo: cheers!
Smudge: that was what I originally started with, but I wanted to make the image a bit darker so decided to go with C.C. having more of a "don't give a fuck" attitude. I might change it back though...or maybe a bit of both...
thanks for the feedback!

Anonymous said...

oh yea finish! great work

Conceit Arturo said...
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Conceit Arturo said...

Yea finish it...but make caveman a little less passive..I know he's reaching for the black girl but it still seems like his action is a bit mild....about the expression I get the perverted look you were going for but a really smug smirk could work with those eyes to make him look even more perverted :p

eduardo said...

muy buen trabajo

Raptor Plateado said...

jajaja capitan cavernicola!! y sus tenn angels

Art Skull said...

Awesome, love the hands inside the fur, just crazy as usual, great work !!!!!

Anonymous said...

Hmmm, need some changes to really work. Fun idea to start with but it looks too much "posing for porn" at the moment. Need more spontanious look to it to really work as supposed to. So play around some with the poses, specially the blonde, she looks like she was copy pasted from some random image.

Ben Newman said...

Conceit: thanks, I'll bear that in mind!
Anonymous:I don't agree with most of your points, but thanks for the crit anyway. You sound like you do art yourself; have you got a link?

jake gumbleton said...

Hi Benjamin!
It's Dr Sketchy on the 12th. You want to come and play?
I see your fabulours brand of sex art deviance blazes on! Good stuff mate.

nicky said...

get it finished mr newman as u know i like this sort of work but like colour stuff better nicky (fairytale collector lol)

olleicua said...

Sorry to hear your work is digging into your drawing time.

Anonymous said...

Where's his club?

PenDRaGoN said...

@anonymous

Try guessing ;)

Steve-O said...

Maybe it's just me but I sort of like the rough unfinished look of this one.. Then again, I rarely finish a sketch..

Frank said...

Awesome. Please finish. What is under that fur anyhow ?